IELTS

Question

The diagram provides the process of growing bananas which are for selling in supermarkets.I want to learn your writing, I hope to get 7.0.Hope you will help me

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

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For Task 1: Please attach an image of what you are writing about. We cannot help you if we can't see the figure.

Read my advice for Task 1 essays.

IELTS TASK 1: Hints, Tips And Advice

Vocabulary Words For Task 1: Reference Post

Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
Put it with your answer in the message body.

Subject: Please review my IELTS essay

Message body:
Topic: Copy the essay instructions accurately here. Attach your image here.

My essay:

(Your text here...)
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AlpheccaStars · Answer

The topic is very bad English.

Millie NguyenThe diagram ~~provides~~ depicts the process of growing bananas which are going to be sold ~~for selling~~ in supermarkets.

Millie NguyenI want to learn your writing, I hope to get 7.0.Hope you will help me

Do not use a comma where a full stop is required.

You will not get a 7 if you memorize another person's writing.
Examiners want to see your own efforts, not someone else's.

Task 1 is a test of your ability to describe mathematical plots, diagrams, maps or flow charts.

You are supposed to report the information, without opinions, recommendations, interpretations or conclusions. It is best to use neutral, unemotional, dispassionate words and descriptions that would be acceptable to a university professor in science, engineering or math.

So the vocabulary for Task 1 is very specialized, and different from Task 2, in which you express an opinion and develop an argument.

Essay writing is a difficult skill to learn and it takes a lot of practice. There is no shortcut or magic solution to success. You need to practice writing essays every day.

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The diagram provides the process of growing bananas which are for selling in supermarkets.

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