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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

I want to correct it plz

i believe that always there is 2 side and i dont think that it will stuck in any side cause life is always has happiness and painful what ever u r in painful at the end some happiness well come maybe u r not seeing it because its small things but for sure u can feel it
  

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Hi, You need to divide this into sentences, starting each with a capital letter and ending it with a period. You need to get rid of text spelling like 'u r'. This will make your writing much better.

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Hi,

You need to divide this into sentences, starting each with a capital letter and ending it with a period.

You need to get rid of text spelling like 'u r'.

This will make your writing much better. If you do that, we will be happy to comment further.

Clive