Elijah Qassar Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I want someone just to grade my essay for IELTS exam from 1-9
The essay topic is : dieting can change a person's life for better or ruin one's health completely . What is your opinion ?
Nowadays, dieting became very essential for people everywhere , and this refers for many reasons such as being fit,keeping body healthy,and for beauty aims.And by years ,reports show that by the 2050 , half of United State citizens are at risk of getting fat, for this reason ,many associations impelled to encourage people doing sport and dieting .Meanwhile,many people were against dieting and they encourage doing sport only , they claim that dieting has a detrimental effect on people's health .
Admittedly , dieting is very important to keep our body free of fatal diseases like heat attack,strokes,sugar diabetes ,and many other.
People who had a disease or over weight obviously, they will do a diet to get rid of his problem. Unfortunately ,a lot of them instead of getting healthy they had additional diseases like blood ,and even psychological disease for instance .
Actually, I believe that making a diet is always good , just if doing it in right way ,and under the supervision of diet specialist because he will advice an integrated nutrition program that is specifically suitable for each person separately.
In conclusion , dieting has a pros and cons . But we can get the advantages if we make it in right way .In addition ,every person should do sport and eat natural products and be away of fat food to have a healthy life .
Nowadays, dieting became very essential for people everywhere , and this refers for many reasons such as being fit,keeping body healthy,and for beauty aims.And by years ,reports show that by the 2050 , half of United State citizens are at risk of getting fat, for this reason ,many associations impelled to encourage people doing sport and dieting .Meanwhile,many people were against dieting and they encourage doing sport only , they claim that dieting has a detrimental effect on people's health .
Admittedly , dieting is very important to keep our body free of fatal diseases like heat attack,strokes,sugar diabetes ,and many other.
People who had a disease or over weight obviously, they will do a diet to get rid of his problem. Unfortunately ,a lot of them instead of getting healthy they had additional diseases like blood ,and even psychological disease for instance .
Actually, I believe that making a diet is always good , just if doing it in right way ,and under the supervision of diet specialist because he will advice an integrated nutrition program that is specifically suitable for each person separately.
In conclusion , dieting has a pros and cons . But we can get the advantages if we make it in right way .In addition ,every person should do sport and eat natural products and be away of fat food to have a healthy life .
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Elijah Qassar The essay topic is : dieting can change a person's life for better or ruin one's health completely . People who had a disease or over weight obviously, they will do a diet to get rid of his problem. In conclusion , dieting has a pros and cons .
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Elijah Qassar The essay topic is : dieting can change a person's life for better or ruin one's health completely . What is your opinion ?Nowadays, dieting became very essential for people everywhere , and this refers for many reasons such as being fit,keeping body healthy,and for beauty aims.And by years ,reports show that by the 2050 , half of United State citizens are a
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Here is an IMPROVED version. but still with many errors. There seems to be a lot of confusion about the verb tenses used and I hardly changed these, a lot of which are still wrong. You should look at the verb tenses used and revise your grammar
on tenses. See if we can produce an even better writing. Hope this helps you. Regards, Mark.
Nowadays, dieting has become very essential for peopl
on tenses. See if we can produce an even better writing. Hope this helps you. Regards, Mark.
Nowadays, dieting has become very essential for peopl
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Thank you very much for your effort 
, but could you please grade my essay from 1-9 ?
, but could you please grade my essay from 1-9 ?00
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OK , Thank you anyway, I just wanted to know if I had any improvement since I started writing essays .
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Hi there, study this version and correct your mistakes and you will learn.
Nowadays, dieting has became very essential for people everywhere, for many reasons, such as being fit, keeping your body healthy and for beauty aims. And by years ,reports show that by the year 2050 , half of the United States citizens will be at risk of getting fat, for this reason ,many associations were impel
Nowadays, dieting has became very essential for people everywhere, for many reasons, such as being fit, keeping your body healthy and for beauty aims. And by years ,reports show that by the year 2050 , half of the United States citizens will be at risk of getting fat, for this reason ,many associations were impel
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Ok, I will send you the old essays that I have written already .
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