Issa Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I want help to correct this in grammar
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Four years ago, I was a student in secondary school when I challenged my teacher. Sometimes offences have some benefits for those who got offended like what happened for me. My story begins when a psychologist specialist came to my class in order to ask about students' ambitions. He took asking in turns. When it was my turn, I said'' I hope to be a student at university.'' My teacher burst into a fit of laughter and addressed me this "It is impossible to be a student at university.'' I got insulted on front of the student and I felt very embarrassed. But that was good for me because what the teacher said provoked me and I considered it as a challenge between me and him. So from that time, I have changed my schedule to put more effort in studying. Year by year my grades went to better and I am now at the best university. So I have to say thank you my teacher.
Four years ago, I was a student in secondary school when I challenged my teacher. Sometimes offences have some benefits for those who got offended like what happened for me. My story begins when a psychologist specialist came to my class in order to ask about students' ambitions. He took asking in turns. When it was my turn, I said'' I hope to be a student at university.'' My teacher burst into a fit of laughter and addressed me this "It is impossible to be a student at university.'' I got insulted on front of the student and I felt very embarrassed. But that was good for me because what the teacher said provoked me and I considered it as a challenge between me and him. So from that time, I have changed my schedule to put more effort in studying. Year by year my grades went to better and I am now at the best university. So I have to say thank you my teacher.
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Four years ago, a psychologist visited one of my secondary school classes to ask the students about their ambitions. When my turn came, I mentioned my hope to attend the university. Upon hearing this, my teacher burst out laughing and embarrassed me in front of my classmates by saying that I was incapable of ever being a university student.
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Four years ago, a psychologist visited one of my secondary school classes to ask the students about their ambitions. When my turn came, I mentioned my hope to attend the university. Upon hearing this, my teacher burst out laughing and embarrassed me in front of my classmates by saying that I was incapable of ever being a university student. His cruel insult motivated me to meet his challenge. I
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