Pierre83 Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance
I need you knowledge!
Hello,
I need your knowledge !
Could anybody read my CV and tell me if there are english mistakes in it.
If you want to answer me, you can either do it on this forum or write me at: Email Removed
Many thanks because I really need some help!
Pierre.
NAME
ADRESS
MAIL
PHONE
PERSONNAL SUMMARY
My experience has made me an excellent communicator,psychologist and diplomat personn i have a great ability to listen and can adapt my interlocutors.
sales has taught me being perseverant and my job as a receptionist and home operator attraction taught me patience.
naturally sociable, friendly and smiling my main preoccupation is to offer the best possible service so that the customer has fond memories of our conversation.
I am delighted with my energy, my enthusiasm and knowledge to contribute to the prosperity of the company.
.
ACADEMIC QUALIFICATIONS
2004-2005: State degree of commerce in Berck France
2003-2004:Vocational training certificate of tourism in Merlimont France
2000-2001: Baccalaureat of literature (A levels) in Berck France
PROFESSIONNAL EXPERIENCES:
2010-2012 : Hypermarcket CARREFOUR Berck
Multimedia Salesman : identify the needs of the customer, develop loyalty of the customer, argue and persuad, have a good knowledge of the product.
2008-2010: Hypermarcket CARREFOUR Berck
Seafood manager : manage the stock, mount its shelve alone, manage planning,highlight the good products
2007-2008: Hypermarck CARREFOUR Berck
Computer Assistant : tapper orders quickly, work under pressure, manage priorities, be autonome
2006-2007: Amusement Park Bagatelle of Grevin group in Merlimont France
host receptionist, attractions operator : be courteous respectful smiling constantly, have good organization skills, manage multiple calls, manage a group or crowd. Know, respect and ensure the safety,maintain a level of optimum concentration, detect and manage problems on his attraction and between customers.
2005-2006: Amusement Park Bagatell of Grevin group in Merlimont France
Diver and Bartender : take customer orders, serve Effectively, anticipate future needs in drinks, maintain clean work environment.
Personal:
Nationality : French
Langages : currently learning English, good writing comprehension
IT skills: Office.
I need your knowledge !
Could anybody read my CV and tell me if there are english mistakes in it.
If you want to answer me, you can either do it on this forum or write me at: Email Removed
Many thanks because I really need some help!
Pierre.
NAME
ADRESS
PHONE
PERSONNAL SUMMARY
My experience has made me an excellent communicator,psychologist and diplomat personn i have a great ability to listen and can adapt my interlocutors.
sales has taught me being perseverant and my job as a receptionist and home operator attraction taught me patience.
naturally sociable, friendly and smiling my main preoccupation is to offer the best possible service so that the customer has fond memories of our conversation.
I am delighted with my energy, my enthusiasm and knowledge to contribute to the prosperity of the company.
.
ACADEMIC QUALIFICATIONS
2004-2005: State degree of commerce in Berck France
2003-2004:Vocational training certificate of tourism in Merlimont France
2000-2001: Baccalaureat of literature (A levels) in Berck France
PROFESSIONNAL EXPERIENCES:
2010-2012 : Hypermarcket CARREFOUR Berck
Multimedia Salesman : identify the needs of the customer, develop loyalty of the customer, argue and persuad, have a good knowledge of the product.
2008-2010: Hypermarcket CARREFOUR Berck
Seafood manager : manage the stock, mount its shelve alone, manage planning,highlight the good products
2007-2008: Hypermarck CARREFOUR Berck
Computer Assistant : tapper orders quickly, work under pressure, manage priorities, be autonome
2006-2007: Amusement Park Bagatelle of Grevin group in Merlimont France
host receptionist, attractions operator : be courteous respectful smiling constantly, have good organization skills, manage multiple calls, manage a group or crowd. Know, respect and ensure the safety,maintain a level of optimum concentration, detect and manage problems on his attraction and between customers.
2005-2006: Amusement Park Bagatell of Grevin group in Merlimont France
Diver and Bartender : take customer orders, serve Effectively, anticipate future needs in drinks, maintain clean work environment.
Personal:
Nationality : French
Langages : currently learning English, good writing comprehension
IT skills: Office.
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I have underlined some of your simplest mistakes in spelling, grammar and word choice. Always proofread yourself before submitting texts to us:
PERSONNAL SUMMARY
My experience has made me an excellent communicator, psychologist and diplomat personn i have a great ability to listen and can adapt my interlocutors.
sales has taug
PERSONNAL SUMMARY
My experience has made me an excellent communicator, psychologist and diplomat personn i have a great ability to listen and can adapt my interlocutors.
sales has taug
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