Nena8811 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
I need help writing a intro letter for my automotive shop to prospective clients for company and groups
This is what I have so far. I have info. that I would like to add into the letter but need help organizing it also. this is what I have:
Montrose Automotive Service established in 2008, is quickly gaining attention in the neighborhood for fantastic automotive service. Our services are popular for being affordable with first-class workmanship. We are a full service workshop, with experience in a broad range of vehicle brands. MAS is ready to assist you with any issue with any vehicle from the most complicated drivability problems to oil changes. MAS is committed in giving its customers the best quality work at the best price. Do not hesitate to call and compare for we are confident that we will gain your business.
Montrose Automotive Service is located at 5611 Kraft Drive in Rockville near Twinbrook metro station, so the convenience is a plus. Our shuttle rides to WhiteFlint and Twinbrook metro stations will keep you on the go, and if you work nearby we’ll shuttle you to your home or work up to five miles away from us.
Montrose Automotive Service has extended these services to fleet vehicles and commercial accounts. Minimized Downtime for fleet vehicles means that you save more money by not having vehicles out of service. We also offer discounted rates to Companies.
SERVICES OFFERED:
MARYLAND STATE INSPECTION
BRAKES
COOLING SYSTEM SERVICE AND REPAIR
TUNE UPS
COMPUTER DIAGNOSTIC
CHECK ENGINE LIGHTS
STATE EMISSION REPAIRS
HEATING AND AIR CONDITIONING
OIL CHANGES
ENGINES
TRANSMISSIONS
STEERING AND SUSPENSION
TIRES SALES AND SERVICE
ALIGNMENTS
WINDSHIELD REPLACEMENT
EXHAUST SYSTEM SERVICE AND REPAIR
DRIVELINE SERVICE AND REPAIR
AND MUCH MORE!!!
Montrose Automotive Service established in 2008, is quickly gaining attention in the neighborhood for fantastic automotive service. Our services are popular for being affordable with first-class workmanship. We are a full service workshop, with experience in a broad range of vehicle brands. MAS is ready to assist you with any issue with any vehicle from the most complicated drivability problems to oil changes. MAS is committed in giving its customers the best quality work at the best price. Do not hesitate to call and compare for we are confident that we will gain your business.
Montrose Automotive Service is located at 5611 Kraft Drive in Rockville near Twinbrook metro station, so the convenience is a plus. Our shuttle rides to WhiteFlint and Twinbrook metro stations will keep you on the go, and if you work nearby we’ll shuttle you to your home or work up to five miles away from us.
Montrose Automotive Service has extended these services to fleet vehicles and commercial accounts. Minimized Downtime for fleet vehicles means that you save more money by not having vehicles out of service. We also offer discounted rates to Companies.
SERVICES OFFERED:
MARYLAND STATE INSPECTION
BRAKES
COOLING SYSTEM SERVICE AND REPAIR
TUNE UPS
COMPUTER DIAGNOSTIC
CHECK ENGINE LIGHTS
STATE EMISSION REPAIRS
HEATING AND AIR CONDITIONING
OIL CHANGES
ENGINES
TRANSMISSIONS
STEERING AND SUSPENSION
TIRES SALES AND SERVICE
ALIGNMENTS
WINDSHIELD REPLACEMENT
EXHAUST SYSTEM SERVICE AND REPAIR
DRIVELINE SERVICE AND REPAIR
AND MUCH MORE!!!
Top answer
Wow!! That is great I think that your wording is perfect you are direct with your services. I know that people now a days are very careful & lack trust in automotive shops do to dishonest garages & mechanics.
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Wow!! That is great I think that your wording is perfect you are direct with your services. I know that people now a days are very careful & lack trust in automotive shops do to dishonest garages & mechanics. I also like the fact that you are up front with your established date. Even though you are new which many people are afraid of garages that just opened. This shows to everyone that y
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