i made this poem but i am not confident with my grammar.any1 cud correct it
The Promises
You said, you’d be online that night,
But you didn’t show up.
You said, you’d call me everyday just to say take care,
But my cell phone wouldn’t ring.
You set a date for us, to prove that, not yet over,
But you’re just like a vanishing shadow that I couldn’t see.
And still I said its ok. I won’t give him up.
Just pretend that were ok.
You said, you’ll love me forever,
But you didn’t mean it.
You said, you still care
But I couldn’t feel it.
Maybe this relationship its not gonna work out
I gave you enough time to prove it, so I think its over.
I never changed nor hate you.
I’m just tired of pretending that I’m ok.
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You said you’d be on line that night, But you didn’t show. You said you’d call me every day-- My cell phone wouldn’t glow. You set a date for us to prove That we were not yet free, But you’re just like a vanished ghost That I cannot see.
— Mister Micawber
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