Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I like this sentence but want to make sure it is "correct"
The line is for product copy that will be marketed in Mass retailers:
"Look great this spring break, wherever your destination, with fresh styling by Hotsilver."
I just wanted some folks smarter than I to review this copy and give me their advice.
Cheers.
Casey
"Look great this spring break, wherever your destination, with fresh styling by Hotsilver."
I just wanted some folks smarter than I to review this copy and give me their advice.
Cheers.
Casey
Top answer
Look great this spring break, whatever your destination, with fresh styling by Hotsilver.
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Look great this spring break, whatever your destination, with fresh styling by Hotsilver.
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