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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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I know many of you find my talks silly, unrealistic, and not to mention dramatic.

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I know many of you find my talks literary, unrealistic, and not to mention dramatic. But many of you will witness what I say true when your reach a proper age. And I pray for who are going to witness the harsh reality of life. May they have the patience and endurance to change that difficult course to relieve themselves.
  

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I know many of you find my talks literary, unrealistic and melodramatic . But many of you will recognize that what I say is true when your reach a proper age. And I pray for those who are going to witness the harsh realities of life.

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I know many of you find my talks literary, unrealistic and melodramatic. But many of you will recognize that what I say is true when your reach a proper age. And I pray for those who are going to witness the harsh realities of life. May they have the patience and endurance to change their difficult course and find relief.

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