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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hi,

The task: Quiz -Composition writing

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers.
Do you agree or disagree?
use specific examples and reasons to support your answer.

title : Evaluate teachers

There has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.

I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons.
First and foremost,The student's evaluation is very important for best teachers and others teachers.
The school can make decision who will stay or not stay to continue the career in the school.therefore, the teacher
will be carful with students and give them correct relation when they ask for help.

Finally,the feedback can change the way that teacher taught or invigorate the teacher to go on with this way.

To conclude , there is no doubt that this way improve the school level .In the long run,every body wil benefit from it.

Thanks
  

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Please someone answer me .
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BeginStudentThere has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.

I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons. OK

First and foremost,The student's evaluation is very important for best teachers and others teachers.
bad punctuation - capitalization.
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I repaired it :

There has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.

I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons.

First and foremost,The student's evaluation is very important for all the teachers.
The school can make decisions on who will stay or not stay to continue their ca
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Is it okay?

There has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
Some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.
I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons.

First and foremost, the student's evaluation is very important for all the teachers.
The school can make decisions who will stay or not or who will continue their careers in t
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You did not make all the repairs.
Remember that sentences begin with a CAPITAL letter, and CAPITALS are used inside a sentence only for proper names.
You have made a couple of spelling errors.
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Where do you see captial letters inside the sentences?
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Where do you see captial letters inside the sentences?
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Apologies, Begin -
I did not see your second post, where you did a good job to make all the corrections.
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