I did project about "Heroin" , i need someone check me the spelling & structure

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Hi,I have finished my project and now i need some check my spelling . TYVM for all helpers .It's introduction :

Feebs11 · Accepted Answer

BeginStudentHi,
I have finished my project and now i need some check my spelling . TYVM for all helpers .

Its Introduction :

After a lot of thinking I decided to do my English project about a drug called "Heroin".This drug is very addictive and people who just try it once can be addicted to it for a very long time .

I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I wanted to know the consequences of using this drug and the research question: "How does heroin affect our lives and what harm can it cause ? ".

I hope that i'll acquire more knowledge about this drug and find answers to my ~~non –answered~~ questions.

Finally, i hope i'll enjoy the process of working on this project and i 'll be given some more information .

Secondary Question :
1.How does heroin affect the human body under different
circumstances?
2.Is heroin an addictive drug?
3.How do people spread heroin?
4.What is the history of heroin?

Thanke

You must remember to use capital "I" for the personal pronoun.

BeginStudent · Answer

Thanks , why did you change the words:"It is " to "its"?
something else about it :"You must remember to use capital "I" for the personal pronoun. " - you mean also if i have "," after it will be capital letter ?- for example :"I wrote the letter to the secretary and I wrote to my mother.

I have part two , it's the first question number one from the list "Secondary questions".

1) How does this drug affect the human body under
different circumstances?

When people use this drug without any medical prescription they may have a variety of diseases.

The first one is when people take an overdose consequently they may die because of high concentration of heroin in their body.

Moreover ,people that use this drug constantly may get the HIV and plenty of other diseases such as hepatitis etc.

The most terrible incidents concerning drugs happen when people try to carry drugs in nylon packages inside their bodies . Sometimes the packages are torn and the concentration of drugs inside the body causes immediate death.

Furthermore , gang members that are addicted to heroin may kill just to have another "shot".

In conclusion , the heroin drug is very dangerous and there is more than one way to be killed by it .

Thanks alot .

I did project about "Heroin" , i need someone check me the spelling & structure

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