I did not write this article influenced by emotions.

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HiDo you find these sentences correct and natural, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome.(Writer speaking to the media about the atrocious treatment of his friend by the police)I did not write this article influenced by emotions; I was very well aware of my action while I was writing it.I did not write this article controlled by emotions; I was very well aware of my action while I was writing it.I did not write this article guided by emotions; I was very well aware of my action while I was writing it.Thanks,TomPS: Is the green phrase grammatically correct?

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

I only like the first one, actually.

Mr. Tom · Answer

Thanks, MM.

Have I worded the green phrase correctly? atrocious treatment of his friend by the police?

Tom

Mister Micawber · Answer

It seems fine.

Hani Otaibi · Answer

personally, I would use the third sentence.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Emotions don't 'guide' well-- they are too uncontrollable.

Toms Mathew · Answer

Hi Mr.Tom,

The first one is right to me.

And the green part........I think 'on' is better than 'of'...

And when you are speaking to the media.....I think 'I do not speak this' is better....

Thank you.

Hani Otaibi · Answer

Thank you for the correction...
The correct one should be the first.

I did not write this article influenced by emotions.

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