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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I am sorry to bother you but my teacher is going to have a baby and...

My English teacher is going to have a baby and she will not come to school this semester anymore so I will not have a chance to ask her to correct my composition. Please can you help me, I study in an ordinary school in Brazil and I want to learn English but our only English teacher is going to have a baby and our classes will only start again in March 2006.Thank you for your help and your interest. Please, can you also comment on the structure of my composition? I cannot pay you with money but I wish you and your family a happy Christmas and good health. Thank you and God Bless you.

In the past, along my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden. As everyone knew everyone there, all the adults of the neighborhood stayed cool. Then came the times of studies and my family moved to a bigger town. Graduated, I became responsible for my life; my entertainment activities were always books, music and movies. When it was possible, I left housework to other person.

At the present, being retired, I have much more time to do all things I couldn´t do in the past; thought, my sources of pleasure are now just the same and I don´t still like to be housewife, so this function is not a choice, only an obligation. As the time advanced I saw that I had very few friends worth to maintain contact with.

In the future, I imagine to gain more energy in the batle against some health disturbances to go somewhere in my country. (I only know 4 cities in Brazil) By the way the study of languages will take always a great part in my life. I hope one day to go abroad visiting Europe.
  

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Hi ~Anon, you are very welcome to our forum and we never ask for payment so don't worry about that. Good luck with your studies and I hope you get to Europe one day. You can register here and we will happily help you with your English...

In the past, during my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden. As everyone knew everyone th