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Netpicker9 Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

humorous Birthday invitation wording! Your ideas

Hi,

I am preparing a birthday invitation for my baby girl. I framed a invitation like below. Can anybody suggest me is it good?

or if anybody has good humorous idea, can please post it here..

"Dad tells me that I can not have my personal email address till I turn eighteen years old.
So I am borrowing my dad's email to invite you all on my 1st Birthday. Please bring my little friends along with you and share the fun."

Please post your ideas! I really appreciate your help.
  

Top answer

My try: Dad tells me that I can not have my personal e-mail address till I turn eighteen years old. So , I am borrowing my dad's e-mail to invite you all on my 1st Birthday. "

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My try:

Dad tells me that I can not have my personal e-mail address till I turn eighteen years old.
So, I am borrowing my dad's e-mail to invite you all on my 1st Birthday. Please bring my little friends along with you and share the fun."
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Thanks for the correction. Do you have any other ideas in mind?
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No but you can bet on children. Emotion: big smile "Yeah, tell me whose baby is going to creep fast?!"
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