Rachidati Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
How was my Weekend?
I went out with my husband on Satuday, we had lunch and coffee an a nice restaurant. At night We watched a Show TV, it was so funny.
But next morning when I woke up, my Flat was terrible, disorganized dirty dishes, clothes, floors. All of this needed to be done before noon, because my sister was coming for a visit us in the afternoon.
So I turned the washing machine On, I cleaned the kitchen, then the bathrooms and floors, and finally I had to make lunch.
What a busy Day!! but the next weekend won't be like this one, I'll make a weekly schedule, I'll have a different task to do everyday. And my husband will have to help me to keep our flat clean and organized.
but honestly I HATE THE HOUSEWORK.
Please correct me.
Thanks
But next morning when I woke up, my Flat was terrible, disorganized dirty dishes, clothes, floors. All of this needed to be done before noon, because my sister was coming for a visit us in the afternoon.
So I turned the washing machine On, I cleaned the kitchen, then the bathrooms and floors, and finally I had to make lunch.
What a busy Day!! but the next weekend won't be like this one, I'll make a weekly schedule, I'll have a different task to do everyday. And my husband will have to help me to keep our flat clean and organized.
but honestly I HATE THE HOUSEWORK.
Please correct me.
Thanks
Top answer
I have marked the grammatical errors: I went out with my husband on Satuday, w e had lunch and coffee an a nice restaurant. At night We watched a Show TV, it was so funny. ) But next morning when I woke up, my Flat was terrible, disorganized dirty dishes, clothes, and floors.
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I have marked the grammatical errors:
I went out with my husband on Satuday, we had lunch and coffee an a nice restaurant. At night We watched a Show TV, it was so funny. (Two comma splices so far.)
I went out with my husband on Satuday, we had lunch and coffee an a nice restaurant. At night We watched a Show TV, it was so funny. (Two comma splices so far.)
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