Yangn2003 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
How to write a letter in this condition？
I just received a letter from a business partner, the content like this:
Dear Mr. NY
Hi, I am Robert Matari from PT corporation in Indonesia. The reason I am calling is to inform you that three persons from our company (including myself) are requesting to visit your factory from 11 January 2011. We are planning to visit for three days and leave on 14 January. We will provide you with our visitation plan soon.
We hope you will be available on these dates, so please provide your comment on the timing of our visit.
Best Regards,
Robert Matari
I reply him as below
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Dear Robert Matari:
Your plan is OK, we will be available when you coming, and we would like to know the content which you'd like to see. Looking forward to seeing you then.
Kind Regards
NY
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The idea which I want to claim is very simple, but I can not guarantee there is no grammer mistakes in my letter, hence can anyone check it for me, please?
Dear Mr. NY
Hi, I am Robert Matari from PT corporation in Indonesia. The reason I am calling is to inform you that three persons from our company (including myself) are requesting to visit your factory from 11 January 2011. We are planning to visit for three days and leave on 14 January. We will provide you with our visitation plan soon.
We hope you will be available on these dates, so please provide your comment on the timing of our visit.
Best Regards,
Robert Matari
I reply him as below
"
Dear Robert Matari:
Your plan is OK, we will be available when you coming, and we would like to know the content which you'd like to see. Looking forward to seeing you then.
Kind Regards
NY
"
The idea which I want to claim is very simple, but I can not guarantee there is no grammer mistakes in my letter, hence can anyone check it for me, please?
Top answer
Welcome to English Forums, yangn. Dear Mr Matari , Thank you for writing. We would be happy to have you visit our factory between January 11th and 14th.
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Welcome to English Forums, yangn.
Dear Mr Matari,
Thank you for writing. We would be happy to have you visit our factory between January 11th and 14th. Could you let us know what particular facilities or operations you are interested in? We will ensure that a staff member is available to conduct your visit, but please let us know your availability schedule
Dear Mr Matari,
Thank you for writing. We would be happy to have you visit our factory between January 11th and 14th. Could you let us know what particular facilities or operations you are interested in? We will ensure that a staff member is available to conduct your visit, but please let us know your availability schedule
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