Tfou Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
How to use "had"
Is there any grammar error of the sentence “ In May 2008 he had been arrested while he carried counterfeit notes with him through the U.S. Customs”
Top answer
S. Customs” I wouldn't say the sentence is incorrect. But I'd omit 'with him', since 'carry' implies that.
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Hi,
Is there any grammar error of the sentence “ In May 2008 he had been arrested while he carried counterfeit notes with him through the U.S. Customs”
I wouldn't say the sentence is incorrect.
But I'd omit 'with him', since 'carry' implies that.
And I'd prefer 'while he was carrying'.
Do you have some special reason in your context for
Is there any grammar error of the sentence “ In May 2008 he had been arrested while he carried counterfeit notes with him through the U.S. Customs”
I wouldn't say the sentence is incorrect.
But I'd omit 'with him', since 'carry' implies that.
And I'd prefer 'while he was carrying'.
Do you have some special reason in your context for
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