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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

How to re-phrase this sentence?

Hello!

How to re-phrase this sentence so that it looks more fluent? Or maybe this is okay?

Commission diagnosed that there
? is occupational illness;
? is not occupational illness.

Thank you!
  

Top answer

Neither is good. Does the Commission consist of medical doctors? Commissions usually do not diagnose .

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Neither is good.

Does the Commission consist of medical doctors?
Commissions usually do not diagnose. They rule.
I suggest
eg The Commission ruled that it was / was not an occupation