Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
How to fix an awkward and run-on sentence
hello i was told that my sentence was awkard and a runon. May you please help me in correcting it. thank you 
1) As they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate they fail in overcoming it.
1) As they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate they fail in overcoming it.
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Hello. I was told that my sentence was awkward and a run-on . Would/Could you please help me in correcting i t?
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Hello. I was told that my sentence was awkward and a run-on. Would/Could you please help me in correcting it? Thank you. -- Your sentence is not a run-on sentence, and it is not awkward; it only needs a change in conjunction and a comma:
Because/Although they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate, they fail in o
Because/Although they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate, they fail in o
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