Panda blue 483 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

How should this sentence be punctuated

And, her affair with the opposite in everyway – love interest Count Vronsky.

And, her affair with the opposite in everyway, love interest, Count Vronsky.


I wasn't sure if it needs two dashes also ? Does it matter ? The dash is acting for emphasis in the first example and the commas are bracketing information in the second.

  

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panda blue 483 I wasn't sure if it needs two dashes also ? Does it matter ? Both seem very badly punctuated, to say the least—so much so that I am unsure what they mean.

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panda blue 483I wasn't sure if it needs two dashes also ? Does it matter ?

Both seem very badly punctuated, to say the least—so much so that I am unsure what they mean.

Is it this?—

And her affair with her love interest, Count Vronskyh