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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

How can I re-word this sentence?

Hi!
Could you help me re-word this sentence so that it is grammatical?

She indicated that John is happy to be in the family and to have a father, mother, sister and brother; he enjoys teasing his sister; she indicated that Ainars calls the applicants a mother and father since January when he arrived in the family.

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eg She indicated that John is happy to be in the family and to have a father, mother, sister and brother, and that he enjoys teasing his sister. She also noted that Ainars has called the applicants 'Mother 'and 'Father' since he arrived in the family in January.

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eg She indicated that John is happy to be in the family and to have a father, mother, sister and brother, and that he enjoys teasing his sister. She also noted that Ainars has called the applicants 'Mother 'and 'Father' since he arrived in the family in January.