HI there, can anyone check if i have any grammar errors thanks

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0 My name is Benson Ma, I was born in the city of West Covina and now I  live in the city of Arcadia. I used to eat a lots when I was about 12 years old. Now I am trying to stay off all the bad foods that are out there so I wouldn't have a heart attack sooner or later. The college I attend right now is known as California State Polytechnic of Pomona. My major as of now is in business as an accountant major. but I am planning to switch my major to some kind of Engineering major like aerospace engineering. This is my second year going to Cal Poly Pomona. 0-

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0 My name is Benson Ma00.00 I was born in the city of West Covina and now I  live in the city of Arcadia. I used to eat 00a lot00 when I was about 12 years old. Now I am trying to stay off all the bad foods that are out there so I 00won't 00have a heart attack sooner or later. The college I attend right now is00 the00 California State Polytechnic of Pomona. My major as of now is in business 00accountancy00 but I00 am planning to 00switch to00 some kind of Engineering major like aerospace engineering. This is my second year of 00attendance at00 Cal Poly Pomona. 0-

HI there, can anyone check if i have any grammar errors thanks

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