Hi, I have a questions about my letter to my professor.

0Hi, this is first posting in this site. and english is my second language, so there might be a hundreds of mistakes in here. 02br
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00Anyway. My professor wanted to us(all class members) to sumit an first impression of his class.02br
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00So here it is.02br
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00Assignment#0 about BD3319 Information Management(Prof.Kim)02br
00(Management Information System)02br
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00Hello Professor X. 02br
00My name is xxx. And this is a Assignment #0 you asked us to submit to you. 02br
00Okay, first of all, I think it's better start with a little bit about me.02br
00I'm a 25 years old. and Junior of this university.(Is this right expression? I mean I am third grade of this university.) also my major is business administration.02br
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00BUT!! I studied aerospace and mechanical engineering for 2 years, until last year.02br
00and finally, I fiured out that I AM NOT GOOD AT THIS, AND I DO NOT LIKE ENGINEERING!!02br
00So, I changed my major to business. 02br
00Therefore, this semester, I registered in 6 required classes. And this class is one of them.02br
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00Well, now you might realized that I don't have any background of this area.:-)02br
00But, I really DO like this stuff. I like reading books, talking with people, discuss about various events. And also I am ready to soak up every information you can give to us.02br
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00Okay, that was little information about me.02br
00and my first impression of this class is that "It's all about collecting datas, so that people who may concern can using that data to make a decision or change their plan or something like that.02br
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00That's it.02br
00Thank you!02br
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00Well, please give me any advice or correct any mistakes. 02br
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00Thank you very much!!050010id1