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Day by day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone could help me learn . I go to night class everyday expect sunday evening . I joint English forum and find many friend help me . I always try my best to learn english but I had some difficult are : the fisrt conditional, second conditional, third conditional, and passive form , If some in English forum explane those , I am very thanks. And remember check all sentences I wrote here. Thanks my friends.

Fandorin · Accepted Answer

QuangtrungvtvDay after day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone can help me to learn . I go to night class everyday except of sunday's evening . I join to English forum and find many friends who help me a lot . I always do it the best but there are some difficulties: the fisrt conditional, the second conditional, the third conditional and passive form. If someone on English forum explains those , I would be very grateful . And remember check all sentences I wrote. Thanks my friends.

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QuangtrungvtvDay by day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone could help me learn . I go to night class everyday expect sunday evening . I joint English forum and find many friend help me . I always try my best to learn english but I had some difficult are : the fisrt conditional, second conditional, third conditional, and passive form , If some in English forum explane those , I am very thanks. And remember check all sentences I wrote here. Thanks my friends.

Hi Quangtrungvtv,

Here is what I see and my comment:

Some phrases you used either don’t serve the purpose you have intended, or they are not properly used. There are obvious capitalization, punctuations and spelling errors. Here is how I would rewrite the paragraph to smooth out the tone and the rough edges:

Everyday, I try to learn and study English very hard. I have tried every method and people are very kind in helping me to learn. I attend night class every evening except Sunday. I frequently visit English forums and find many volunteers to help me. I am eager to learn but I have many difficulties to overcome. For examples, conditional usage and passive usage are some of the areas I need help on.

I am very thankful if anyone at the forum can explain the differences and please correct my sentences.

Thank you, my friends .

Hi friend, please help me correct this paragraph.

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