Roberta Gallant Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
help with email
How is the following email message to Janet Hunt, the executive coordinator
of People First of New Hampshire? Did I paragraph the sentences grammatically
correct? If no, how should I paragraph them correctly?
Roberta Gallant
Concord, New Hampshire
USA
Hello, Janet -
Yesterday afternoon, I revised pages 6 and 7 of the Large Pepperoni Pizza with an Advisor on the Side
booklet and emailed you back them. Did you received those revised pages of the booklet from me?
If yes, how do they look?
Today I have not heard back from you saying that the revised pages went to your laptop-computer inbox.
This is why I am asking whether you have received them back from me.
Roberta Gallant
of People First of New Hampshire? Did I paragraph the sentences grammatically
correct? If no, how should I paragraph them correctly?
Roberta Gallant
Concord, New Hampshire
USA
Hello, Janet -
Yesterday afternoon, I revised pages 6 and 7 of the Large Pepperoni Pizza with an Advisor on the Side
booklet and emailed you back them. Did you received those revised pages of the booklet from me?
If yes, how do they look?
Today I have not heard back from you saying that the revised pages went to your laptop-computer inbox.
This is why I am asking whether you have received them back from me.
Roberta Gallant
Top answer
Hello Janet , Yesterday afternoon I revised pages 6 and 7 of the Large Pepperoni Pizza with an Advisor on the Side booklet and emailed them back to you. Did you receive them ok? How do they look?
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Hello Janet ,
Yesterday afternoon I revised pages 6 and 7 of the Large Pepperoni Pizza with an Advisor on the Side
booklet and emailed them back to you. Did you receive them ok? How do they look?
I am just checking whether you received them or not as I have not had any confirmation yet that they arrived in your inbox.
Thanks,
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