help plz in mu introduction..

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Hi everyone,How are you doing?I want some help in my introduction which is about divorce in UAE.. I don't know if there is mistake in verbs or anything else. So, anybody would like to check it. ---Before the rapid development in U.A.E divorce was rare and a shameful act. But nowadays, the divorce rate among nationals is a round 33 percent. In a recent study, the  divorce in U.A.E and other Gulf nations is higher than other countries in the Middle East(Gulf News). In this essay I will explain the causes, effects and solutions for this problem.

Blue Moon · Accepted Answer

Hello,

How are you? I am not that great in Essay writing, but I say that that was a really good Introduction. Better then the Introduction I would do, lol. What is your heading? Are you gonna do a heading for your Essay? The Introduction explained alot to me about your Essay.

Thanks,

bye!

Kagomi · Answer

I'm fine,

Ya I'm doing a heading for my essay.

Thankyou for passing by.

cheers.

Blue Moon · Answer

Hello,

Okay, Your welcome! Bye!

lol

Kagomi · Answer

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Anonymous · Answer

Hi Please can i have a look on your essay.. coz i have an cause and effect essay about divorce in the uae.

help plz in mu introduction..

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