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0 Heey, could someone please help me with correcting 02 br
00 this Essay that I have to hand in tomorrow...........!!! 02 br
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01 font 00 The Assignment was to write 3 paragraphs, about 02 br
00 your favourite room. use relatively pronouns and 02 br
00 give a general discription about your room, minimum 250 words 02 br
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00 My Favourite Room 02 br
00 My favourite room would be my own room of course. Throughout the years I have bought and assembled all sorts of silly items to decorate my room. There are posters as tall as you stand, little lights, which are fixed in the ceiling, and a lot of self-made paintings and photographs that all give my room its unique style. Although my room is very small, it easily holds all the stuff I need to relax and feel right at home. 02 br
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00 It's a great place to hang out. My room doesn't offer stress related items such as a bumping stereo, computer or a television. My room purely represents relaxation for all that enters the room and for yourself the most, because after you get home from school or if you want to get away from everything around you it's the ideal place to be. In the centre of my room you'll find a big doublesized bed, which is very useful for somebody whose friends come over to sleep almost every week. There lays a large beige spread made of the most soft Egyptian cotton you've ever felt. I have six pillows, that excist from 2 large ones, 3 normal ones and 1 tiny one. One of the most important things in my room is its atmosphere, which exists from the prayers I pray every day. Those prayers are kept in the extra space in the corner heading south in my room where it's absolutely clean. 02 br
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00 My room is my haven. Everything I could need and want to have fun in everyday life is in it. Many have complimented me for keeping it so empty and clean without getting a unpleasant feeling. 02 br
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00 Written by Faisal 02 br
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00 this Essay that I have to hand in tomorrow...........!!! 02 br
00 thanks in advance 02 br
01 i 00 ____________________________________________________ 02 i 02 br
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01 font 00 The Assignment was to write 3 paragraphs, about 02 br
00 your favourite room. use relatively pronouns and 02 br
00 give a general discription about your room, minimum 250 words 02 br
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00 My Favourite Room 02 br
00 My favourite room would be my own room of course. Throughout the years I have bought and assembled all sorts of silly items to decorate my room. There are posters as tall as you stand, little lights, which are fixed in the ceiling, and a lot of self-made paintings and photographs that all give my room its unique style. Although my room is very small, it easily holds all the stuff I need to relax and feel right at home. 02 br
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00 It's a great place to hang out. My room doesn't offer stress related items such as a bumping stereo, computer or a television. My room purely represents relaxation for all that enters the room and for yourself the most, because after you get home from school or if you want to get away from everything around you it's the ideal place to be. In the centre of my room you'll find a big doublesized bed, which is very useful for somebody whose friends come over to sleep almost every week. There lays a large beige spread made of the most soft Egyptian cotton you've ever felt. I have six pillows, that excist from 2 large ones, 3 normal ones and 1 tiny one. One of the most important things in my room is its atmosphere, which exists from the prayers I pray every day. Those prayers are kept in the extra space in the corner heading south in my room where it's absolutely clean. 02 br
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00 My room is my haven. Everything I could need and want to have fun in everyday life is in it. Many have complimented me for keeping it so empty and clean without getting a unpleasant feeling. 02 br
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00 Written by Faisal 02 br
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00 My favourite room would be my own room 00 , 00 of course. 00 Over 00 the years I have bought and assembled all sorts of silly 00 [?] 00 00 items to decorate my room. There are 00 life-sized 00 posters, little lights, which are fixed in the ceiling, and a lot of 00 my own 00 paintings and photographs that all give my room its un
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01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 10 Heey, could someone please help me with correcting 12 br
10 this Essay that I have to hand in tomorrow...........!!! 12 br
10 thanks in advance 12 br
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