Help me, please (to pass my exams)

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I decided english to be chosen as my graduation exam from high school, that's why I need your help.Please, check my sentences.

1) Why did you decide to enter Donetsk Technical University and not Kiev Pedagogical or Kiev Technical University?

2) Do you really want to acquire this profession or you expect your future occupation not to be connected with your specialization? Astion for me I'm going to acquire any profession useful in some way or other. The key condition (is it appropriate using of these words, or not?) is that I should study in a budget department (the same question). I choose (or "decided to enter") Donetsk Technical University because of it's close location and the fact that my father graduated from it and advised me to study there too.

3) Regardless of anything it'll be very useful for me to learn more about Great Britain, it's traditions, and to speak english with englismen.

4) We invite you to take part in the mathematics study group session which will be devoted to the using (may "the problem of using" be more favorable here) of derative and nantiderative in mathematics and it's practical meaning in other sciences by the example of physics. The session will take place in the chemistry room on Monday at 15.00.

I'll be very happy if you help me. Oleg from Ukraine

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

1) Why did you decide to enter Donetsk Technical University and not Kiev Pedagogical or Kiev Technical University? What is your answer here?

2) Do you really want to acquire this profession or you expect your future occupation not to be connected with your specialization?

Astion for me I'm going to acquire any profession useful in some way or other. The key condition (is it appropriate using of these words, or not?) is that I should study in a budget department (the same question). I choose (or "decided to enter") Donetsk Technical University because of it's close location and the fact that my father graduated from it and advised me to study there too.

I think that if you are looking to be accepted into a university, it is not wise to say "I don't really want to study here, but it's close by." There are other things you can say. Like "I honestly don't know what my ultimate profession will be, but I know that I will learn many things that Donetsk that will help me in whatever I do. My fathr graduated from this university and has advised me that I will get a good education that will help me in whatever field I ultimately end up in." Something like that.

3) Regardless of anything it'll be very useful for me to learn more about Great Britain, it's traditions, and to speak english with englismen. How about "In addition to the curriculum, it will bebe very useful for me to learn more about the United Kingdom and its traditions and to have the opportunity to speak with native English speakers. (Note well: it's means it is, while its is the possessive.)

4) We invite you to take part in the mathematics study group session which will be devoted to the using (may "the problem of using" be more favorable here) of derative and nantiderative in mathematics and it's practical meaning in other sciences by the example of physics. The session will take place in the chemistry room on Monday at 15.00. What do you want to correct here? "devoted to the use of ..." and its. I don't know what natiderative is - do you mean anti instead of nati?

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Thank you very much. Your notes are very significant for me.

Oleg from Ukraine

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