Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Help me out, its urgent
Kindly rephrase if require this is letter I am sending to creative director of the company please help me out its very important for my career
Good Afternoon Sir,
I had come for an interview, rather the interview I would prefer to say to get creative insights at you agency, around 3 months back. It was one of the best learning sessions I have in my professional career. I would like to thanks you for all the analytical feedbacks given for my work which will really help me in my career. We signed off on the note that within a week or so you will shot out a mail to me for saying yes or no. but till now I haven’t got any mail from your end. It might be that I didn’t match up the parameters you are looking for or whatever reasons I respect your decision. But indeed I was waiting for the feedback for the assignment I mailed you and secondly what you think I am lacking that will be very helpful to me. Sometime I think that I shall switch off my advertising to other industry after 4 experiences into it I am not getting the exact profile I am looking for so at least your valuable comments will help me lot making my career decision more easy. I request you kindly take out sometime & please give me analytical feedback, which jut have my weaknesses
Good Afternoon Sir,
I had come for an interview, rather the interview I would prefer to say to get creative insights at you agency, around 3 months back. It was one of the best learning sessions I have in my professional career. I would like to thanks you for all the analytical feedbacks given for my work which will really help me in my career. We signed off on the note that within a week or so you will shot out a mail to me for saying yes or no. but till now I haven’t got any mail from your end. It might be that I didn’t match up the parameters you are looking for or whatever reasons I respect your decision. But indeed I was waiting for the feedback for the assignment I mailed you and secondly what you think I am lacking that will be very helpful to me. Sometime I think that I shall switch off my advertising to other industry after 4 experiences into it I am not getting the exact profile I am looking for so at least your valuable comments will help me lot making my career decision more easy. I request you kindly take out sometime & please give me analytical feedback, which jut have my weaknesses
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Dear _________________ I had an interview with you three months ago. It was one of the best learning sessions I have had in my professional career and I received many creative insights about your agency's work. I would like to thank you for all the analytical feedback on my work, which will really help me in the future.
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Dear _________________
I had an interview with you three months ago. It was one of the best learning sessions I have had in my professional career and I received many creative insights about your agency's work.
I would like to thank you for all the analytical feedback on my work, which will really help me in the future. We ended the interview with the agreement that with
I had an interview with you three months ago. It was one of the best learning sessions I have had in my professional career and I received many creative insights about your agency's work.
I would like to thank you for all the analytical feedback on my work, which will really help me in the future. We ended the interview with the agreement that with
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