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Annihilator Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Help me in this short sentenc plz

hey
my english is so weak and its kiling me
can any 1 corect these short sentenses for me
its about a picture of a hunter character

feel free to change the words if that makes it better
thanks
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You know , people are so much like animals
First they want to attack you they want to frighten you
but they dont know what is really going on
Then they try to defend against you they try to get rid of you
but they dont know what is really going on
Then they try to run away from you they try to hide from you
but they dont know what is really going on
at the end of the day they all are hunted
  

Top answer

no answer its not a hard paragraph ! i just want to be shure cuse i want to attach it to some video

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no answer
its not a hard paragraph !
i just want to be shure cuse i want to attach it to some video Emotion: ick!