Nonodiv Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Help me in correcting these sentences please ?
Hi guys, please help me in correcting these sentences :
1. She shouted which make the family gathering around .
2. Nothing could be heard unless samsa's crying sound .
3. He went to the closet which on it there was a mirror .
4. We have been waiting since so long .
5. He had white skin that his blue veins are clearly appeared.
6. There were diamonds that you could see your face on it as the mirror is .
7. Why my tall is 130 cm?.
8. The thing she loved the most that she will never be injured .
Here is my draft :
1.She shouted which make the family gathering around.
2. Nothing could be heared except samsa's crying voice .
3. He went to the closet on which there was a mirror.
4. We have been waiting since so long.
5. He had a white skin that made his blue veins clearly appeared.
6. There were diamonds on which you could see your face asbypu can do on the mirror.
7. Why is my tall only 130 Cm .
8. The thing that she loved the most , she will never be injured.
Please answer soon .
1. She shouted which make the family gathering around .
2. Nothing could be heard unless samsa's crying sound .
3. He went to the closet which on it there was a mirror .
4. We have been waiting since so long .
5. He had white skin that his blue veins are clearly appeared.
6. There were diamonds that you could see your face on it as the mirror is .
7. Why my tall is 130 cm?.
8. The thing she loved the most that she will never be injured .
Here is my draft :
1.She shouted which make the family gathering around.
2. Nothing could be heared except samsa's crying voice .
3. He went to the closet on which there was a mirror.
4. We have been waiting since so long.
5. He had a white skin that made his blue veins clearly appeared.
6. There were diamonds on which you could see your face asbypu can do on the mirror.
7. Why is my tall only 130 Cm .
8. The thing that she loved the most , she will never be injured.
Please answer soon .
Top answer
She shouted which make the family gathering around. Her shout brought the whole family around 2. Nothing could be heared except samsa's crying voice .
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1.She shouted which make the family gathering around. Her shout brought the whole family around
2. Nothing could be heared except samsa's crying voice . Nothing but Samsa cries could be heard.
3. He went to the closet on which there was a mirror. What do you want to say here?
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2. Nothing could be heared except samsa's crying voice . Nothing but Samsa cries could be heard.
3. He went to the closet on which there was a mirror. What do you want to say here?
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Here is my draft :
1.She shouted, which made the family gather around.
2. Nothing could be heard except Samsa's crying.
3. He went to the closet in
1.She shouted, which made the family gather around.
2. Nothing could be heard except Samsa's crying.
3. He went to the closet in
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