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Palina Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Help me correct my buisness letter

We wold like to welcome you as a constant client to our company.We would like to get your production and to become your distribution in RUSSIA.Will be happy to discuss any aspect of our credit policy with you at your convenince. We shell be very grateful it you put the catalogue and the prices for us to look.We hope that we will give us the opportunity to serve you in the future.
We know that you will be extremely satisfied with our cooperation.
Furthemore , I want to say for myself and the other members of our company that we shall be very glad to have you call on us and consult with us at time you think we can be of help,as it is always a real pleasure to meet our customers personally.
We look forward to hearing from you.
  

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Dear friends, It gives us immense pleasure in inviting you as constant client to our company. It will be good to discuss any aspect of our credit policy with you at your convenience. We hope that you will give us the opportunity to serve you in and we will be successful in giving you extremely satisfied response.

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Dear friends,

It gives us immense pleasure in inviting you as constant client to our company. we will be highly obliged to become your distributor in RUSSIA for your products.It will be good to discuss any aspect of our credit policy with you at your convenience.
We shell be very grateful if you provide the catalog and prices to have a look.We hope that you will give us the opportuni
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i am not able to understand this language, plz respond in english
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Please respond in English only.

Regarding the original letter, it was not clear to me whether you are seeking clients, or sending an orientation package to clients you already have.
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i felt it was like seeking client, and accordingly i replied
what you think