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Dear sir,Thank you so much for your attention and giving a positive reply to my requestIt was so kind of you to consider my  deep interest to have the chance of continuing my education in Ph.D level which has become more convenient by your geat help ;as,  your educational activity domain is my favorite case for continuing the education. Regarding the previous email considering your emphasis on  coordinating the scholarship process by myself and the useful link sent by you,I found that there are some chances of financing.At the end I ,think that by my being hard work and, demonstrating your guidance ,I will achieve my goals.Thank you again ,Sincerely yours,.....thanks in advance i should send this mail tonight so if it is possible check it soon

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Dear sir, (it will be better to write his name, like Dear Dr. Johns or sth like that)

Thank you so much for your attention and a positive reply to my request.
It was very kind of you to consider my deep interest to have the chance to continue my education for Ph.D degree that has become more convenient by your great help; as, your educational activity domain is my favorite case for continuing the education (I didn't understand what u exactly mean). Regarding the previous email considering your emphasis on coordinating the scholarship process by myself and the useful link sent by you, I found that there are some chances of financing (here I couldn't understand what u mean, maybe u will write by separate sentences what u mean, so I can help u infy your ideas in one sentence). Finally, I think that my readiness to work hard and, demonstrating your guidance (u should paraphrase here), I will achieve my goals.
Thank you again ,
Sincerely yours,

Andriy Lapin · Answer

Good evening, SunnyShiny,

my variant:

Dear Sir,

Many thanks for your positive reply. I am grateful for your substantial help with my request and your appreciating my keen interest in obtaining a PhD degree from your university. Having carefully studied your previous e-mail message and the link contained therein (concerning my taking initiative to apply for scholarship), I found that I am eligible for this kind of financial help. I express hope in further effective collaboration and assure you that my studying at your university will be marked by hard work and motivation.

Sincerely,

Your name

It is preferable to address the professor by his name (as Mr Anonymous correctly suggested).
This is my vision of the subject, SunnyShiny. Good luck to you.

Respectfully, Gleb Chebrikoff

SunnyShiny · Answer

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Andriy Lapin · Answer

May success attend you, my friend. Never hesitate to ask me directly

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Respectfully, Gleb Chebrikoff

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