Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Help in editing my CL
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can anybody help me to edit my covering letter?
Dear Mrs...,
being very fascinated of Japan and looking for a five-to-six month internship in order to fulfill my degree in electrical engineering I found the XYZ-website with some advertisements of your company.
Since my major professional interest is measurement technology I am writing to apply for an internship in your company, starting in May or June. I would very much like to work in the field of test engineering and I would very appreciate to get a chance of working in Japan.
I have finished four years of studies in Electrical Engineering at XYZ University, Germany. After completing of my pre-diploma two years ago I desided to countinue my study in the field of measurement technology. So I acquired a lot of theoretical knowledge in this particular field.
Doing an internship before my study and working during the study I gained wide practical experience in the fields of electrical circuits, electronical measurement and embedded programming.
Because of internationality of my university many lectures were held in English. So I have constantly improved my language skills. Besides, I attended two half-year English courses last year.
My CV contains additional information on my experiences and skills.
I would very much welcome the opportunity to do my internship with your company and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerily
can anybody help me to edit my covering letter?
Dear Mrs...,
being very fascinated of Japan and looking for a five-to-six month internship in order to fulfill my degree in electrical engineering I found the XYZ-website with some advertisements of your company.
Since my major professional interest is measurement technology I am writing to apply for an internship in your company, starting in May or June. I would very much like to work in the field of test engineering and I would very appreciate to get a chance of working in Japan.
I have finished four years of studies in Electrical Engineering at XYZ University, Germany. After completing of my pre-diploma two years ago I desided to countinue my study in the field of measurement technology. So I acquired a lot of theoretical knowledge in this particular field.
Doing an internship before my study and working during the study I gained wide practical experience in the fields of electrical circuits, electronical measurement and embedded programming.
Because of internationality of my university many lectures were held in English. So I have constantly improved my language skills. Besides, I attended two half-year English courses last year.
My CV contains additional information on my experiences and skills.
I would very much welcome the opportunity to do my internship with your company and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerily
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, B eing very fascinated of Japan and looking for a five-to-six month internship in order to fulfill my degree in electrical engineering , I found the XYZ-website with some advertisements of your company. Since my major professional interest is measurement technology I am writing to apply for an internship in your company, starting in May or June will the intership start or will you start working there?. I would very much like to work in the field of test engineering and I would very appreciate to get a chance of working in Japan.
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Dear Mrs...,
Being very fascinated of Japan and looking for a five-to-six month internship in order to fulfill my degree in electrical engineering, I found the XYZ-website with some advertisements of your company.
Since my major professional interest is measurement technology I am writing to apply fo
Being very fascinated of Japan and looking for a five-to-six month internship in order to fulfill my degree in electrical engineering, I found the XYZ-website with some advertisements of your company.
Since my major professional interest is measurement technology I am writing to apply fo
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