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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

help for the construction of a sentence

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00I'm new here but i hope that someone can help me...02br
00I have to translate a sentence which is part of a letter which is really too complicated for me ( as you can see my English skills arent so good...)02br
00So here is what i wrote :02br
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00An intuitive way of looking is important for me, I deliberately want to distance myself from the “Disenchantment” generated by Concept Art02br
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00I avow an intuitive way of looking, through which I deliberately want to distance myself from Concept Art and the “Disenchantment” generated by it.02br
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00 I avow an intuitive way of looking, through which I deliberately want to distance myself from Concept Art which is without magic for me.02br
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00I hope that you are able to understand at least the sense of one of these sentences.. I would prefer to write something " I avow" but I'm not sure if I can use it in that case.. If not a word with a similar meaning would be great...02br
00I would be so happy if someone could help me! Thanks a lot!02br
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02br 02br 00I hope that you are able to understand at least the sense of one of these sentences.. I would prefer to write something " I avow" but I'm not sure if I can use it in that case.. 02br 00I would be so happy if someone could help me!

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0 00Hi,02br
00Welcome to the Forum.02br
02br
00I have to translate a sentence which is part of a letter which is really too complicated for me ( as you can see my English skills arent so good...)02br
00So here is what i wrote :02br
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00An intuitive way of looking is important for me, I deliberately want to distance myself fr
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0 Hi, 02br
00Thanks for your reply!02br
00Isn't it unclear if I write "....01span01span00from the disenchantment of Concept Art." whether I mean that 02span02span01span01span00Concept Art is desenchanted or that
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0 Hi,02br
00Isn't it unclear if I 00write00"..00from 00the disenchantment of Concept Art." whether00 00I mean that 00Concept Art is desenchanted or that the disenchantment is caused by Conce00pt00 Art00?02br
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00True. You could say more explicitly 'from the disenchantement caused by . . '. 02br
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