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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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help! : a short paragraph about TQM

0Hi, I'm wiritng a short paragraph about TQM. It'd be great if you guys can help me check it. I'm not sure if it's all correct.02br
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01b00The radical changes in organizational processes in the manufacturing industry were led by the focus on quality in the service sector, originated from the total quality management (TQM) movement. Organizations start on quality management at first focused on the stabilization of processes, the reduction of variance, and the organization performance improvement. Lately, extensive customer-focused quality improvement efforts have adopted by the manufacturing companies. It is this latter focus that has been covered by the service sector, both private and public.02b010id1
  

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0Don't write everything in bold, it makes it difficult to read. Bold should only be used when you need to add emphasis. Ta.

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0Don't write everything in bold, it makes it difficult to read. Bold should only be used when you need to add emphasis. Ta. 05002br
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00The radical changes in organizational processes in the manufacturing industry were led by the focus on quality in the service sector, 01b00which 02b00originated from the total quality management (TQM) movement. Or