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I/m very sorry for my poor English, but would someone check my mistakes in this exercise:

The more I look, the more I see.
The more I listen, the more I hear.
The sun is hiding in the sea,
And days are getting shorter here.

I learn from flowers and birds.
For my mistakes I beg your pardon.
And make up lines from those words,
Which I have found in the garden.

But what my rhymes are able to tell.
If I were Byron or Shakespeare,
I would speak English very well
And wouldn’t meet your eyes in here.

Thanks in advance.
Boris