Hello people, can you please check it for mistakes. Thanks

I have a semester to study and I want to do my best to finush my studying this year. I dont have enough money to retake all course that I failed, I am ready to do everything I can to close all holes im my Academic Path, it is very important for me to get my Bachelor in Uniceristy of Nicosia, but unfortunatly I made a lot of mistakes in the beggining of my studying. First year I founded mixed martial art club, for UNIC students, it is for free, and I am still training their as a coach and president of this society. It took from me a lot of studying time, but now I found a person who will keep this club without me.
A lot has been going this year, I have to much work to do, but I am fully ready to finih it all. I started my own business, and I pay for university by myself, and it is hard sometimes to put work and studying on the line, cos if I will lose my job, I will not have money for paying my study. But i really hope that you undertand my situation and let me take a chance frome you.

I feel strongly that I have a good grasp of the material and do not need to actually repeat the course but rather just retake the exam.

Please kindly give me another chance. I am heartily willing to take a retake. I am hoping you reconsider my please.
Would it be possible for me to meet with you to discuss this, and see if there are any other chance for me?

I would be very grateful if you had some time, at your convenience of course, to talk to me about these matters.