Hello, maybe someone could help and run through my motivation letter? i would be very grateful:)

Dear sir or Madam,

I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the Fashion Design with Marketing and Production at the University of Huddersfield.

I am not sure about many things, but about on thing I am absolutely sure: my future will be somehow connected with the world of fashion industry. I am interested in many ranges of fashion: fashion design, shows and magazines. All these ranges are combined in Fashion Design with Marketing and Production program and that is precisely why I am motivated to be a part of your university.

The possession of certain abilities, such as creativeness, self-sufficiency and aspiration of knowledge, will help me to assimilate every new concept, that is presented to me and also quickly adapt to the educational system of your country. I enjoy working in teams and as a result it has made me a flexible person, who knows how to listen to the opinions of others and how to express myself.

In conclusion I would like to say that I like to take responsibility and to work as part of a team. I am eager to gain new experiences and in my opinion this program is the best way to achieve that. I am positive that the University of Huddersfield would be an excellent start for an ambitious fashion designers career.

Thank you for considering my application

Yours faithfully