Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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I am interested in obtaining a position at your company. Having plenty of exposure to automated and computational tools working in various labs, I have always been interested in transitioning to a career with a company specializing in these products. Because of Bananatech's particular expertise in science and technology, this company would be an excellent opportunity to be part of a serious team and continue to develop relevant skills.
I have been involved in projects investigating banana resistance, primarily geared towards traditional banana research techniques. I have also engaged in research utilizing computational and analytical methods complementing traditional lab work. These projects have included studying and writing scripts modeling banana interactions, as well as banana modeling with banana visualization software, and identifying banana pathways from banana data.
Because of my work experience with both traditional and computational approaches to scientific problems, I believe I can better understand and work with Bananatech's products and people. I look forward to following up with you about how I can work to fit your needs.
I am interested in obtaining a position at your company. Having plenty of exposure to automated and computational tools working in various labs, I have always been interested in transitioning to a career with a company specializing in these products. Because of Bananatech's particular expertise in science and technology, this company would be an excellent opportunity to be part of a serious team and continue to develop relevant skills.
I have been involved in projects investigating banana resistance, primarily geared towards traditional banana research techniques. I have also engaged in research utilizing computational and analytical methods complementing traditional lab work. These projects have included studying and writing scripts modeling banana interactions, as well as banana modeling with banana visualization software, and identifying banana pathways from banana data.
Because of my work experience with both traditional and computational approaches to scientific problems, I believe I can better understand and work with Bananatech's products and people. I look forward to following up with you about how I can work to fit your needs.
Top answer
Hi, Let me offer you an overall comment. In Canada, the approach that is always recommended is to apply for a particular position . eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana factory floor sweeper.
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Hi,
Let me offer you an overall comment.
In Canada, the approach that is always recommended is to apply for a particular position.
eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana factory floor sweeper.
eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana painter.
eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana analyst.
eg I wish to apply for
Let me offer you an overall comment.
In Canada, the approach that is always recommended is to apply for a particular position.
eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana factory floor sweeper.
eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana painter.
eg I wish to apply for a position as a banana analyst.
eg I wish to apply for
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I understand what you are saying but here I am concerned if any general grammar errors were present. Its clean right?
Thanks
Thanks
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