0(1) This seems to be a perennial problem, that we cannot live without bloodshed, without going after our enemies.02br 02br 02br 00Comma usage, please check.02br 02br 02br 00(2) But the basic drive is to get food and to get the mating available. And it is in this here that Jainas perceive what kinds of passions are working.02br 02br 02br 00Can "And it is in this here" be rephrased fro clarity? Please rephrase.02br 02br 02br 00(3) And it is in this way that Jainism began, with a large group of mendicants who decided, who left the household life, left all the activities, subsisted on the least possible, amount needed for food and water and shelter, and led a very frugal life, sustained by the laypeople who were able to support them.02br 02br 02br 00Do we need comma before amount? Please advise.02br 02br 02br 00(4) But nowadays these are asked and they must perforce find answers to that.02br 02br 02br 00Is the usage "perforce find" ok? Please check.02br 02br 02br 00(5) This is the tale of an elephant, who, in his very next rebirth, was reborn as Prince Mega and become an eminent Jaina monk under Mahavira. And Mahavira is telling the past story of this particular man:02br 02br 02br 00become or became? Please advise.0-
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02font 02br 02br 01font 00 00 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Comma usage, please check. 00OK02font 02br 02br 01font 00 00 02font 02br 02br 01font 00(2) But the basic drive is to get food and to get the mating available. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 00 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Can "And it is in this here" be rephrased fro clarity?
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