Grammar Correction.

Trinh Au

Hi my name is Trinh. I wrote an essay but I do not have any people to correct for me. Can you help me, please? Thank you much and have a nice day.

Trinh.

ESL 163


The Important of English Writing


Writing English is valuable in my life. First, it is important for studying in college. In my

classes, the tests, midterms and final exams are requiring me to write the essay. If I did

not write well on the essay then I will get bad grades and drop out from my classes. I will

receive a lower GPA. It will be hard for me to transfer to the university college. I will not

have chance for awarding the financial aid and scholarship for my tuition. Second, English

writing is very necessary in my nursing major. In nursing, the nurse has to write many

statements about her patient’s health. It has a requirement for me to pass the English

Writing Two A to be a nurse. In addition, English writing is important in other businesses. I

need to be a good writer to write the letters for my coworker, manager, boss and company.

I will be fire if my letters have many grammar mistakes. If I was a manager and my English

writing is bad then my employee will not obey and respect me. Also, it is hard for apply to

other job when my resume has many mistake. A best choice for me to have a good grade in

college, a nice job and employee respect me is study harder to improve my writing skill.