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Please let advise of any grammar or punctuation improvements. Thanks guys. First post btw

Dear James,

Please accept this letter as confirmation that, with payment of the Voluntary Redundancy package, all disputes- official or otherwise- I have initiated against the bank shall be waived.

Regards,

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Please let advise of any grammar or punctuation improvements. Thanks guys. First post btw

Welcome to the Forum.

Dear James,

Please accept this letter as confirmation that, with payment of the Voluntary Redundancy package, all disputes- official or otherwise- I have initiated against the bank shall be waived

I'd just add a space after 'disputes'. And a period after 'waived'.

On this Forum, we only advise about grammar, not about legal matters.

Clive

Asl2012 · Answer

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