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Navitasan Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

For whom I felt

Are these sentences correct:
1) This was a man for whom I felt concern and a desire to slap.
2) This was a man for whom I felt a desire to slap.

Gratefully,
Navi.
  

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navitasan Are these sentences correct: No, they read poorly to me. The first one is too much. 1) This was a man for whom I felt concern.

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navitasanAre these sentences correct:
No, they read poorly to me. The first one is too much.

1) This was a man for whom I felt concern.
2) This was a man whom I felt a desire to slap.