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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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Fear can hold you prisoner, hope can set you free!

0The following is the tagline of film 01i00Shawshank Redemption02i00:02br
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01b01font00Fear can hold you prisoner, hope can set you free!02font02b02br
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00I want to make an aphorism of similar kind such as:02br
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01font00Fear can make you a loser, hope can make a king.02font02br
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00Please help me to make the above aphorism better. Should you have any other idea you are welcome.0-
  

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12font 12br 12br 10Please help me to make the above aphorism better. 02font 02b 00 0-

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01cite10Jackson661212cite10The following is the tagline of film 11i10Shawshank Redemption12i10:12br
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11b11font10Fear can hold you prisoner, hope can set you free!12font12b12br
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10I want to make an aphorism of similar
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01cite10Philip12cite11blockquote
11cite20Jackson661222cite22br
20The following is the tagline of film 21i20Shawshank Redemption22i20:22br
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21b21font20Fear can hold you prisoner, hope can set you free!22font
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01cite10Jackson661212cite11blockquote
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21cite30Jackson661232cite32br
30The following is the tagline of film 31i30Shawshank Redemption32i30:32br
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01cite10Jackson661212cite10...........12br
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11b11font10Fear can hold you prisoner, hope can set you free!12font12b12br
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0In my prior post I wrote:02br
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01font01b001:02b00 Shawshank Redemption is also one of my favourite movies.02font02br
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00But I think the above sentence 01b00is02b00 (not 'was') 01b00wrong in the given context02b00. The correct 01b00wordi
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01cite10Yoong Liat12cite10In my prior post I wrote:12br
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11font11b101:12b10 Shawshank Redemption is also one of my favourite movies.12font12br
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10But I think the above sentence 11b10is12b10 (not 'was') 11b
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01cite10Jackson661212cite10Hi Philip,12br
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10I am very happy to 11font10know12font10 this. Shawshank Redemption is also one of my favourite movies. Take care.12br
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10Best wishes, Jackson12br
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