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Please read through the paragraph and make corrections where you find mistakes. Thanks.
Thanks for inviting me to join the group. As I was scrolling down the group I saw that some post of the group were quite old. I'm surprised why I haven't been aware of the group before?
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Sorry, Sundarnaz. Actually I was interested in your post that is why I replied to it in hopes of seeing an answer by a native speaker to your question. Thanks for inviting me to join the group.
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Sorry, Sundarnaz.
Actually I was interested in your post that is why I replied to it in hopes of seeing an answer by a native speaker to your question.
Thanks for inviting me to join the group. As I was scrolling down to the group, I saw that some posts of the group were quite old. I wonder why I haven't been aware of the group before.
Regards,
JA
0sundarnazAs I was scrolling down the group
The red part seems superfluous because you have already established what you are talking about.
sundarnazI saw that some post of the group
The
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