Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Vocabulary
expressions for a research project
Hi, I'd like you to correct the following sentences.
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We are presently planning a research project.
For the project, we would like you to recruit 300 respondents, who work at big IT companies as section managers or department managers, earning more than 0.1 million dollars a year.
Their specialties, such as financial system or production system, are not taken into consideration.
The respondents' names need to be listed in alphabetical order.
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Thank you in advance.
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We are presently planning a research project.
For the project, we would like you to recruit 300 respondents, who work at big IT companies as section managers or department managers, earning more than 0.1 million dollars a year.
Their specialties, such as financial system or production system, are not taken into consideration.
The respondents' names need to be listed in alphabetical order.
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Thank you in advance.
Top answer
Looks fine to me. Someone might suggest removing the comma after 'respondents' in the first sentence, but I think it's proper. It has to do with 'defining' or something or other I've never fully understood.
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Looks fine to me. Someone might suggest removing the comma after 'respondents' in the first sentence, but I think it's proper. It has to do with 'defining' or something or other I've never fully understood. I think CJ will be able to answer my doubts..he's excellent.
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