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Jason7377 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

essay introduction

I am writing an essay for grade 12 English on the history and evolution of the English language. This what I will be writing about precisely

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OLD ENGLISH (from the beginning to 1066)

· Germanic origins

· Latin influence

· Norse influence

· Celtic influence

MIDDLE ENGLISH (1066 to 1485)
  • Old and Middle English
  • The 12th to 14th centuries
  • c. 1400
MODERN ENGLISH (1485 to the present)
  • English Language Reform - Americanization
  • Early Modern English (1500 - 1800 AD)
Canadian English
  • Grammar
  • Vocabulary

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What I have for an introduction thus far is this:



With 300 million speakers and over 600,000 words, the English language has become the cornerstone of all spoken communication in our modern world. This, however, did not happen overnight. It took many years of simplifications and additions to reach the dialect that is spoken today. The English language has been influenced by many cultures and peoples throughout its evolution from its Anglo-Frisian origins to what we speak today.

Can you tell me what you think of it and give some ideas on how to improve it.


Thanks,
J






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** I noticed some obvious errors so I changed it to this: With approximately 300 million speakers and over 600,000 words, the English language has become an international leader in all spoken communications in the modern world. This, however, did not happen overnight. It took many years of simplifications and additions to reach the modern dialects of the language that are spoken today.

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** I noticed some obvious errors so I changed it to this:

With approximately 300 million speakers and over 600,000 words, the English language has become an international leader in all spoken communications in the modern world. This, however, did not happen overnight. It took many years of simplifications and additions to reach the modern dialects of the language that are spoken today.