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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

English. Repetition

This is an extract from my summary. My young university teacher said that it is not ok because there are repetitions. But I used these repetitions intentionally! To my mind, it sounds nice. I just wonder if my teacher is right.

Finally, the author underlines five main ways of new words appearing. The first way is when an old word is used with a new meaning. The second way is when two old words are combined to get a new one. The third way is when a new word is created by forming initials. The fourth way is when a new word is given from another language. And the fifth way is when an absolutely new word is created.
  

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Anonymous To my mind, it sounds nice. I just wonder if my teacher is right. Your teacher is right.

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AnonymousTo my mind, it sounds nice. I just wonder if my teacher is right.
Your teacher is right. Eliminate so much repetition of 'way' and vary your sentence structures more. As it is, it is boring.