Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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"It felt like I was standing on top of the World, a place where only happy thoughts could exist, and there I was thinking all about you! "
Hi all I would be grateful if someone could give me some advise about the above. I was just wondering whether is makes sense. I am trying to describe how I felt after reaching the summit of Mt Tangariro.
"It felt like I was standing on top of the World, a place where only happy thoughts could exist, and there I was thinking all about you! "
Hi all I would be grateful if someone could give me some advise about the above. I was just wondering whether is makes sense. I am trying to describe how I felt after reaching the summit of Mt Tangariro.
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"It felt like I was standing on top of the World, a place where only happy thoughts could exist, and there I was thinking all about you! " Hi all I would be grateful if someone could give me some advise about the above. I was just wondering whether is makes sense.
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"It felt like I was standing on top of the World, a place where only happy thoughts could exist, and there I was thinking all about you! "
Hi all I would be grateful if someone could give me some advise about the above. I was just wondering whether is makes sense. I am trying to describe how I felt after reaching the summit of Mt Tangariro.
Hi all I would be grateful if someone could give me some advise about the above. I was just wondering whether is makes sense. I am trying to describe how I felt after reaching the summit of Mt Tangariro.
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The sentence makes sense.
Because "and there I was thinking all about you! " follows " a place where only happy thoughts could exist" I assume that thinking about this person is not a happy thought?
Because "and there I was thinking all about you! " follows " a place where only happy thoughts could exist" I assume that thinking about this person is not a happy thought?
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I've merged the threads. Additionally, please give more descriptive titles than "English help."
Thanks.
Thanks.
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This is my observation. What made you feel like standing on top of the world? It sounded like something happened, or you did, is that right?
Your sentence is grammatically fine. But I felt the last clause "...and there I was thinking all about you! " can be more connected to the main clause ( happy thoughts) . So I suggested as follows:
<< "It felt like I was s
Your sentence is grammatically fine. But I felt the last clause "...and there I was thinking all about you! " can be more connected to the main clause ( happy thoughts) . So I suggested as follows:
<< "It felt like I was s
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